Now I Have found Unrest... A Poem By Kurama1313
Is my life all a waste,
Just a game,
A toy to you?
I tell none
Of the darkness inside.
NOW I HAVE FOUND UNREST!
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A life for a life,
A tooth for a tooth,
An eye for an eye, you say.
Yet, I never complain,
Never struggle against these chains
With which you bind me.
AND NOW I HAVE FOUND UNREST!!
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I have no soul,
No feelings inside,
To share with the outside world.
My heart is a block
Of hardships felt
NOW THAT I HAVE FOUND UNREST!!!
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My world is all ashes,
My life, a meaningless husk.
To see you there,
All sure of my death,
Which you feel will soon come,
It gives me something to hold onto.
One word, which is
UNREST!!!!!!!!!
Very impressive might I say to another writer of poetry of another try and use stonger words that may descrbie it more fearlessly the more the words are the more it will be more powerful but its still powerfull in it's own matters =) 8.5/10
Thanx!:P