On a Rainy Day........
6th Grade Beginning: On a rainy day, I fell asleep. The house was empty. It was gloomy and lonely day. When one's self is shouting in anguish but know one is listening. It was my kind of day. Alone in darkness. I watch as rain hits the door and windows. And listen as it pounds on the roof. Like sobbing clouds from the corner of frustration and despair. Thunder in the distance, lightening off and on. With no power, no electricity, all you hear is rain, thunder, and lightening. It makes you realize how lonely in the world you really are. I closed my eyes. When I was in my house alone I fell asleep. I dremt about me standing in a field alone staring at the moon in the deepest of night. With the wind whistling. I was alone. Not an animal or anything else was there. Only the earth and sky so close but never touching. I just stood there looking, hoping for universal truth, a resolve to let me know every thing would be ok. But nothing came. As I drifted away all I saw and felt was sorrow, lonelyness, and depression. But I did not cry as raw emotion came from me and flowed around me. All I did was drift into sorrow all alone, alone. All of this on a rainy day. 7th Grade Addition: I agree with my past self but a few things have changed. As I drifted farther and farther, emotions, thoughts, and an even bigger assortment of things rush through me out of nowhere to the point where I'm about to burst. I opened my eyes and felt sorrow with no one around. Asleep, I saw a door, but like a child, was to scared to open it for who knows what is behind the door? The door was an inside link to me But it was also the blockade I put up to avoid reality. All I could ask was why bother? Conflicts, wars, death, famine, why not just let life crash. Why try when the deck is stacked against you? Then, I realize, I was wrong. It was up to me to open the door not wait for someone else to. It's up to me to make a move, to take a stand, and if I don't who will? So I woke up, opend the door to my house and stood in the rain ready for what ever the world throws at me and I am ready to brawl. So be prepared world, I will rise and save the Earth from it's downward spiral. Destroy the ignorance we so proudly hail and throw out the fake world and put forth the truth which takes the form of a question. Once the question is asked it is up to you to answer it. Are you ready? The question is.............
omg that was deep in i don't know where to begin but like at first i really was thinking that u were all sad and in the middle i thought that u grew more and more confused and scared but at the end u faced ur fears and u where ready for anything man dude ur so strong cause some ppl would just wait till someone opened the door for his/her self and they like would always depend on others and yea ...... woah i liked this one better than the other one heheh just putting it out there and yea i just favor this one more cause i think its cool and u ROCks for being able to open the door ready for anything thrown at u and yeah that about all i could think of but keep up the good work cause their is ppl willing to read what u write like meee ^^^^
WoW.....idk what 2 say...it was deep...tense {i held a breath i didnt know i was holding the whole time}...idk i wanted 2 know what was going 2 happen at the end.... good 4 u 4 realizing that no ones going 2 face your problems, fears, your eniemes, or yourself for u BUT yourself......u need 2 come write my papers and poems for me!!!