Someone cold as you
Drip! Drop! Drip drop!
It's raining I thought to myself
as I sat alone in the dark house....
"someone cold as you wouldn’t care
if you played with there emotions
it wouldn’t matter is you used me
I wont say a thing because
I don’t want to hurt you
so you keep using people
and you keep taking never thanking
even if you do it's doesn’t change
the minds of others it doesn’t change
my mind either because you
have taken a lot from me not
understanding how hurtful you can be
someone so cold wouldn’t care about me
you wouldn’t listen if I tired to yell your name
even if you try to do things the right way
you keep making them worst
your mistakes cause you things
like the ones you love
but I know that I’m fading away
but your to blind to see because
you won't listen...your different from others
you don’t see like others...
you don’t feel the way like others...
you seem so superior in peoples eyes
but I don’t see that I never did....
you only did very little...
you didn’t do much but a little...
to make sure I didn’t turn my back on you...
but for someone cold as you..."
I said quietly to myself....
the tears fell upon my cheek
like raging waterfalls that fell rapidly...
so I closed my eyes and fell asleep
-x-
Thank you Lori for fixing my grammar,spelling,and puncation mistakes.
I MADE THE CORRECTIONS FOR U ITS AN AWSOME POEM. I HAD A PLEASURE READING IT
Drip! Drop! Drip drop!
It's raining I thought to myself
as I sat alone in the dark house....
"someone cold as you wouldn’t care
if you played with there emotions
it wouldn’t matter is you used me
I wont say a thing because
I don’t want to hurt you
so you keep using people
and you keep taking never thanking
even if you do it's doesn’t change
the minds of others it doesn’t change
my mind either because you
have taken a lot from me not
understanding how hurtful you can be
someone so cold wouldn’t care about me
you wouldn’t listen if I tired to yell your name
even if you try to do things the right way
you keep making them worst
your mistakes cause you things
like the ones you love
but I know that I’m fading away
but your to blind to see because
you won't listen...your different from others
you don’t see like others...
you don’t feel the way like others...
you seem so superior in peoples eyes
but I don’t see that I never did....
you only did very little...
you didn’t do much but a little...
to make sure I didn’t turn my back on you...
but for someone cold as you..."
I said quietly to myself....
the tears fell upon my cheek
like raging waterfalls that fell rapidly...
so I closed my eyes and fell asleep
-x-